Thursday, September 24, 2009

I haiku'ed too soon......


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Fall mists writhe in dawn
Seeking entry in chilled dance
Warmth denies them gain
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3 comments:

Sparrow said...

Good one! But I liked the one you submitted as well.

PRH....... said...

Short, sweet, and to the point!

Crucis said...

Morning light
Autumn's dawn beckons
Dew fading into mist.