Thursday, September 24, 2009

I haiku'ed too soon......

Fall mists writhe in dawn
Seeking entry in chilled dance
Warmth denies them gain


Sparrow said...

Good one! But I liked the one you submitted as well.

PRH said...

Short, sweet, and to the point!

Crucis said...

Morning light
Autumn's dawn beckons
Dew fading into mist.